Dream Deep

Yeah. And I repeat: WEIRDNESS!!

Dude. Weirdness. :wink: Your mind strikes my as a particularly [s]unorganized[/s] scary place...

Whee! I love you. :wink: I'm so so so sorry it's taking so long to get more up, I'm a hopeless procrastinator... soon I hope. EDITED:> the typos and suggestions. ...

Heh, thanks Rei, for the comments. ^_^ Ah yes, the prologue... it's sort of necessary to explain what the chair is or at least that there is one... it's refered ...

Ah yes...I can just see Shan, ready with some violent exclamtion pausing and saying..."Oh shucks." Hilarious image, joke...but of course, seriously... 0.0 But no, none of the cursing seemed particular

Important Issue in the Chair: I don't swear. Mainly because my parents would kill me if I did. Now - as you have likely noticed - there is some cursing ...

Bravo, my friend, bravo. This was wonderful - but in some places you switched tenses... and in others your description ran together and became confusing. Observe: There once was a ...

Dreamy... You make me want to give up any hope of being a writer and go curl up in a corner and WEEP. :shock: Is that... a good thing? Heh... ...

Imp has good, helpful opinions. ^_~ -I just noticed the change in the dream sequence last night. It may just be nostlalgia, vaguely speaking - I liked it shorter. It ...

Muahaha. I know what it says. Worship me. :cool: I think it's really pretty, Kay.I don't really think it's cliched... ^_~ Just sweet.

1. Not a problem, Wiggy. :wink: Take your time. 2. To Imp--> EDITED. Thanks a lot for the crit and the pointing out of the typos. Lol, I do apologize ...

Consider it done. :wink: Thanks for the suggestion.

Yuppers. ^_~ No continuation yet, you need to give me till tomorrow for that, but it's the second draft. :wink:

All I really noticed that could use some help was Shan's incessant habit of running his hand through his hair. Was this intentional? I'm assuming it is a sort of ...

Muahaha. And haikus probably don't help the situation... ^_~